The Konkuk Bulletin changed the design of the cover for the first time and it was simple and good. However, the title of the Cover Story did not stand out that much, so it was little hard to fully understand what the cover was going to talk about. There was a typing error in the table of contents, so next time, we should avoid this kind of small mistake. For the Campus Briefing, capitalization was not fully done on the article about mascot. Some of the pictures for the Campus Briefing were disappointing; there should be better pictures provided instead of the ones used. The diagram for the Campus Briefing was nice because it was neat and easy to check out. Moreover, we should avoid ambiguous word such as “so on” in the Campus Briefing. For the Opinion, the picture on the title was a little dark, so the readability was quite difficult. The Layout was also similar to the Campus Briefing, so it was hard to differentiate between them. The World News was a new corner, and the reporter did well. However, it would have been better if the name of the corner and the title was different. For the Campus Life, the overall layout was good and matched the article and pictures well. However, it was disappointing that the selection criteria of the menus were ambiguous. Furthermore, it would be better to put “Best menu” rather than “Price”. There was a writing error on the Global Life. It was good that the reporter arranged the countries with keywords. For the Cover Story, the timing of the article was not so good. The design of the cover and the article did not match the topic closely. Furthermore, the topic itself was slightly lightweight as well. It would be better to put the interview ahead of the body. Overall, the order of content was good and the content was rich, too. For the Interview, it was hard to figure out the interviewee’s job because the picture did not describe what she was doing. After reducing the Interview to two pages, it felt like the picture was little bit excessive. For the Issue, there were some writing errors such as “Gwangwondo” and “Morover”. The reporter selected the topic well. For the Cartoon, it was a little disappointing that the two hands were depicted differently, and it reminded us of the music video of BLACKPINK. The overall layout for the Bulletin Comment was fine. It would have been better if the reporter had put actual images and used the icon for won instead of dollars. The questions for the Exchange Student section was a little boring. The layout of the pictures was too crowded and certain questions, such as number eight, could have been deleted. For the Reporter’s Pick, the content was more focused on K-pop rather than Korean culture. The layout of the article and the pictures were a little confusing. For Review 1, it seemed like an English textbook. The topic was fresh but the overall amount of the article lacked a little. It would be better to put keywords on each questions. For Review 2, the color used on this corner usually reminds people of death, so it would be better to avoid this kind of dark color. It was good to write about new topics but at some point, we should write articles considering the foreigners’ side.
Do Hyo-young, Editor firstname.lastname@example.org
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