The first Campus Briefing news did not have pictures. It would be better to include students’ opinion. The second article is good to get information. The third article is not good that there was a big difference between the date of article and when it happened. The fourth article needs picture that reporter takes. The last article is interesting and readable because of its interview content. Cartoon needs to complete their painting. Moreover, there are some incomplete parts. The Cover Story’s topic was timely considering the ongoing pandemic and started with a suitable question to ask. Introducing societal problems was also a novel way to approach on the issue. However, the article might have been difficult for those unfamiliar with the topic. The difficulty could have been eased withthe use of more pictures or illustrations, but there was a lack of them. Giving actual cases about the each content helped conveying the content, but it resulted in lengthy paragraphs. World News_Economy is well logically developed but somewhat less timely adjustable. World News_Health uses appropriate pictures and diagrams. However, some sentences are unnatural. World News_Society introduces what happened on YouTube but it would be better to provide more examples of harmful content. World News_Politics is quite confusing to read its title because of its picture. Campus Life had information that students are interested in. Global Life’s topic is interesting but it needs to use more various words. Interview is good to understand the veterinarian. However, it would be better to include many pictures. Bulletin Comment’s topic is attractive and has much information from interview. Especially its pictures are realistic. However, conclusion needs to have detailed content. Exchange student’s last part is great but it would be better to include other pictures showing the culture of the country. Review_Life seems to have a lot of contents. Moreover, the topic is good because it is a field that many people are interested in these days. Review_Nature’s back ground picture is not good, but the content is good to have some interesting information. Opinion’s topic is good for these time, but the layout is quite disappointing. Hallo is fresh because it is a new country, but the topic does not seem to fir with the time of publication. Trend has interesting picture and good layout.
Byeon Sae-eun, Editor firstname.lastname@example.org
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